Holidays in Thailand

Can you read the following story? (a song I wrote myself)?

hello guys .. So I'm writing a novel, and I thought I had put the premise here, to see if any of you reading? written as a fake documentary, a form of journal entries by a female character, the story follows a couple on their holiday trip in Thailand. Ideallic the situation gets bad, where the male protagonist eats a fried insect a peddler, and unknowingly, is infected by parasites, which continue, in your mind and body, gradually transform into violent chaos. The female has a greater weight of the issue, documentation on a daily basis through his diary (although the situation is much deeper than she thinks) * literally * Let me know what you think and be honest. first response, not impossible at all .. Title hair is after a parasitic worm known as the hair, which infects insects .. transforms them into suicidal maniacs … Parasite type on YouTube, there is a video not a snail infected by one.

Sound interesting.

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